Gynophobia Introduction

Gynophobia Introduction is basically a very short Visual Novel that wants to test out an idea. It's main purpose is to bring across the idea of making a Visual Novel with the storyline/plot based around the phobia of girls. Aka, Gynophobia. If I'm going to be honest, this is actually the FIRST game I have ever wanted to try to make fully fletched out. I've never actually stuck with the other game ideas I had. This one though, I feel like there could be potential. But I need to be led in the right direction. As I am a very beginner when it comes to storytelling and games in general. That's why I would appreciate ANY AND ALL feedback on the idea, and also the very short introduction to the game I have. If you read all of this, then I thank you. Have a nice day, and never let anyone control you.